tanithryudo | Finished YvtW scenes

Need some proof-reading before I post it. I was forced to cut the last parts of the first scene short because I'm unfamiliar with the MU and I was getting writers block on it for a while... Also, if the stream of dialogue from the second scene seems very confusing, and some lines seem like it could've been said by more than one character - that's okay, 'cause that was what I was trying to get across.

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The next installment might some time; I'm not quite sure how I want to do things yet, and there's some ideas I have that I need to talk to FBH and Yeo first...